“I have never had much luck with women and so I have decided to try internet dating to overcome this. I think I am basically a good person.
I like taking holidays within the United Kingdom and have visited many parts of it as well as certain of the Scottish islands.
I am fairly easy going and would be willing to try most activities.”
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I am a man in my mid-thirties and any help or advice or constructive criticism would be appreciated.
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I’m going to rewrite this for you:
I have never really found the right woman for me, so I decided to try internet dating so I can finally find my soul mate.
I am looking for a woman similarly aged and who enjoys quiet holidays in the tranquil parts of England and Scotland. I also enjoy (replace if you don’t) gardening, cooking and salsa dancing. I definetly have an adventurous side.
My perfect date would be just you and me relaxing over a meal, drinking wine and talking about our lives (shows you are relaxed and pleasant). I am looking for a compatible personality as I don’t want anyone to be upset if it doesn’t work out (implies you are caring and a good person).
Age – 13
Gender – Female
Yes, I know I’m young but I think I did a pretty good job. Also, if the description doesn’t fit you or the way I have written it doesn’t suit you, change it so it does.
The one you wrote implies that you are very formal and find it hard to relax. Hope I helped!
I’m also in my mid-thirties (female), and if I were browsing profiles I’d want to see a little more detail. What are your other interests besides travel? What are you looking for in a partner? What’s your social life like? Are you shy or outgoing? I would also wonder why you’ve never had much luck with women — you may want explain that a bit further or start off with something a bit more positive and optimistic.
that’s lame. sorry. “basically a good person”? why would someone want to date someone isn’t REALLY GENUINLY good?
and thats cool that you like taking vacations, but most people don’t care straight off the bat.
“fairly easy going”? why aren’t you just easy going? have some pride in your self and don’t sell the glass half empty.
girl and it doesn’t matter
Joe – I’m a 40 year old gorgeous married mother of 4 …My honest opinion ..its naff… Dont tell women you like holidaying’ in the UK.. exotic-hot ( ok! Magaluf ) destinations are preffered…
Tell them your a good looking Solvent guy (even if your a pig in pants ! ) – in his thirties…own home & car… tell them your career has kept you single ..now your looking for the right one blah be de blah !!! dont tell them you are married/divorced or seperated with half a dozen bits of luggage… dont tell them your up for anything !!! or they will have you dangling by your bollocks… keep it simple…and dont ask them for a picture of them with their kit off… have fun & stay safe…
If that’s true, then that’s all that matters,
14 year old chap
The Scottish islands are part of the UK
male,40….no offence but change the lot…..or reword it better..
Yeah but do you like doggin?? class add that!