Can you rewrite my profile to date women? below is my information and everything about me and what I like in women:
Name: Gabriel
Address: Live in New York
Age: 33
Religion: Christian but non-domination
Looks: good looking, dark hair and eyes….with dark skin
Height: 6’1 and weight 210 Lbs
Race: American but my dad originally from Greece and my mom is Arabic
Marital status: Divorced after I was married to woman 20 years older than me
My Match: I like sexy old women, simple and caring….I prefer women over 30 years old. I don’t like skinny women.
Tall, Curves and voluptuous….My women type is like Monica Bellucci and Raquel Welch.
I would love to date divorced or single or widowed women …….even in her 50s …..I would love to date bi women too….I’m very open minded and people privacy means a lot to me…..
I have been very busy lately; I work with US Government in IRAQ. Still looking for something real; Someone who can be my best friend, my lover and my confidant. Friendship is the first step in any relationship. I’m not looking for intimate encounter or multi relationships. I’m real and serious.
I am looking for a mature smart female who enjoys being the center of attention, open minded, wanting to explore all of her experiences and never hesitate to share her fantasies with me …I have always being with people older than me, because of the maturity level…..
I adore a mature woman that accepts me, for who I am, Qualities that I seek in a woman:
- Intelligence
- Confidence
- Independence
- Age (I think older women are sexy!)
I believe strongly in a 50/50 relationship… I would like to meet a woman who knows who she is and is comfortable in her own skin. Integrity, Honesty, character, Intelligence and a sense of humor are traits that are important to me as well as chemistry
Please, help me to write introduction to attract women between 30-50 years old……feel free to change anything and add anything u may think it will be good for me.
Thank you
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You bring a bit too much baggage and some contradictory information in your profile. Under religion, you put you are Christian. If you are a practicing Christian, you should either put you are seeking another Christian or leave it out altogether. And your openness to “bi” women also contradicts Christian values. And a Christian man would not be looking for a lover, he would be looking for a wife to have as a lover.
Under divorced, you need to delete the part where you were married to a woman 20 years older than you. That suggests that the woman may get too old for you.
I would delete that you don’t like skinny women, because many people think that Monica Bellucci and Raquel Welch are skinny.
You also need to omit that you would love to date divorced or widowed women. That eliminates women who never married and widowed suggests you are looking for a sugar mama.
If you are seeking women as young as 30, you need to de-emphasis the older lady thing. That is a very large age range and most people would think that a 30 year old and a 50 year old can’t be your type, unless you are 80.
You put that you live in New York, but mention Iraq. This may imply that you won’t be in New York and in Iraq. You need to clarify. Stating your actual position may help.
It would also be great to mention whether or not you have children. No children would be a selling point.